We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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technology rising with time and its use is prominent in our day to day life.
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use of technology and suggest some way to deal with it. Two main factors responsible for
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internet availability, it
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people to find new ideas whereas connectivity has increased . -social media and online platform are appeasing to youth but banking services have been improved since
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decade and so does interoperability between government as well as customers. so, it is
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in order to avoid human error.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial Intelligence (AI)
  • Machine Learning
  • Automated
  • Internet of Things (IoT)
  • Telecommuting
  • Digital Technology
  • Virtual Workplaces
  • Computer-assisted
  • Healthcare Industry
  • Reliance
  • Privacy
  • Human Interaction
  • Job Displacement
  • Automation
  • Digital Divide
  • Cybersecurity
  • Internet Safety
  • Digital Crime
  • Ethical Considerations
  • Environmental Impacts
  • E-waste
  • Carbon Footprint
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