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Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Choosing a subject has become increasingly a controversial topic among certain
lerners
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learners
 in
this
 society.It is often argued that teenagers should focus on all kind of
subjects
 whilst others disagree and believe they should only provide importance to those subject which they are superior or interested
,
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 I completely disagree with
this
 statement .
To begin
 with , the supporter who claims that student should concentrate on entire school
subjects
 give their reason that in
institution
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 all item of
subjects
 play an essential role in learner's soul since they can provide various kinds of significant details regarding many things
such
 as History, tradition, culture which is very beneficial for youth in order be
fimilar
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familiar
 with a country's history .For ,example a recent research claim that around 95% of
tenegers
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teenagers
 do well in their future as they collect acknowledge in every sort of things
although
 they feel boredom in student life
but
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they are able to get
a satisfied jobs
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therefore
 individuals think that teenagers should take all
subjects
 as important.
On the other hand
, the masses who reckon that youngster should only give their importance to those dependent which is their favourite often vocalise that even though every piece of a subject is important in growth but they should only concentrate
to
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 those likely which they are interested in because they will feel immense pleasure by reading those books ,
Moreover
 they will
also
 able to learn faster since they are more interested in
this
 books ,
Furthermore
 child can do better by analysing those
subjects
 in which they are talented even they can
also
 get a high salary job in near future. To conclude , according to my perspective I would say every sort of topic are essential in boy activity so I believe they should focus
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