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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

#students #science #subjects #university #countries #effects #society
A variety of classes reduce interest for students in opting for arduous subjects
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of
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science
. It has always required a lot of efforts.
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, preference leads to another choice. Despite the impotence of learning
science
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 people gaze towards education requiring not a lot of hard work and patience. Frequently, in order to attain the average grades in
science
 subjects’ students spend more time compared to different others. Having
such
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 may prove challenging. Especially when most of the non-
science
 students are involved in leisure activities. For some, graduation after 2 years and gaining a diploma is enough to provide good money for living
instead
 of spending
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 time for
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.
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, the
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 crucial factor can be that location of work relates to big cities,
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Science
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 the foundation and vital part of society in order to develop and going forward to new findings. Improving living standard, curbing pollution environment the things we’re only able to get through learning and discovering. The impact is striking enormous.
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 if there is no new coming of participants and Scientifics there will be an adding of pressure on the current practitioners and
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 is not a very
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 condition for the society.
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 conclusion,
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 a suitable condition will help to disrupt misbalances at employment and encourage new members to launch fresh energy into the field.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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