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Should your school ban the use of cell phones on school property?

Schools should not ban
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 from utilizing mobile
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 while at school because
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 like
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phones
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 and computers helps
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 learn. In my opinion, I think it is easier for
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 to use
cell
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phones
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 to communicate with each other. When
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 can communicate with each other like that, they can help each other on projects. Collaborative environments improve the cognition/performance of
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. Having
cell
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phones
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 at school does wonders for learning and exploring.
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, in terms of learning and exploring,
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 can get access to a diversity of resources in different fields so that they could raise their awareness.
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, nowadays, the Internet is a product of
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 which really powerful tool for every people in the world to meet and exchange knowledge. Especially Google, we cannot deny that Google is a beyond great machine that plays a crucial role in people’s lives, it brings people to a whole new world. It has a lot of information
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 as translations, scholarly e-books, dictionaries, and thesauruses.
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,
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 gadgets in general and mobile
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,
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, are so convenient.
This
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 can be shown in the way that modern
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 don’t have to bring a heavy backpack when they go to school. Even without carrying textbooks,
students
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 still get the same, if not more, information. Convenience may not seem like it is that important;
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,
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convenience makes learning easier and more accessible for all
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. To summarize,
cell
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phones
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 help
students
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 learn better because mobile
phones
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 not only aid
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 to get access to a range of resources in many fields but
also
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 do these inconvenient ways.
Technology
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 is really developed in the 21 century -- why not take advantage of
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 by letting
students
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 use
cell
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phones
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 to learn?.

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