Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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Science
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is one of the most important aspects of our life, but over the past years
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of students who want to learn
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subjects
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intensively diminished. The main reason is a lot of pupils do not have
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and enthusiasm to discover it,
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science
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is extremely difficult for many individuals.
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, not all students can afford
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in
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universities or colleges around the world.By the
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biology, chemistry, physics are the most uninteresting subjects for 75
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of
leaners
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learners
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.Approximately half of
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study
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subjects by force, because, they are very complicated and need
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amount of patience and power.
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reason is pupils who do not wealthy parents, cannot have
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to be at high appreciated study buildings, except they dive into
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science
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and win a scholarship.
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process can lead
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exploration of Earth, so in some
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people can not find out
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of the accidents.
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they wouldn't take
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measures.
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consequence is
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of workers, for
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no one is involved in
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, there will be a shortage of experienced medical practitioners,
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can create imbalances in society and will be increased pressure .It would lead
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and social issues. To avoid
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problem government divide billions of dollars to attract people, but it is not so effective.Without
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, it becomes difficult to make the right decisions, especially on important issues. Ignorance is dangerous. In conclusion, the decline in the number of candidates choosing
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will affect not only individuals
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but the growth of the entire country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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