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Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is individuals responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Sugar
 has been considered to be
a
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harm
for
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human
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 body. In terms of making solutions for
sugar
 intake,
government
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 is expected to take action on society’s
sugar
consumption
.
On the other hand
, it is believed that
people
 should have their own responsibility
on
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 limiting the amount of
sugar
 they consume. In my opinion, both ideas are rational but I strongly reckon with the fact that
government
 takes a greater impact on the
consumption
 of
sugar
. Nowadays, the appearance of
sugar
 is rife
among
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 our society and the food seems to be addictive to many
people
.
Although
sugar
 is well-known for its harmful character,
however
, there is still a tremendous amount of
people
struggle
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 with limiting
sugar
 in their diet, and the major reason is lack of knowledge about
sugar
.
Sugar
 can be in many forms other than granulated, it
also
 appears in honey, maple syrup, canned food or frozen goods. There are many
people
 who avoid granulated
sugar
 but still consume other forms of
sugar
unconciously
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unconsciously
 which makes them find it hard to limit the
sugar
 intake. Because
people
’s actions towards
sugar
consumption
is
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 not efficient due to the reason above,
thus
government
 participation is crucial. In terms of
government’s
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 responsibility towards
sugar
consumption
, raising
sugar
 awareness for residents is a delicate solution.
For instance
, adolescent in Canada
are
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 now prepared with knowledge in relation to
sugar
 at school.
The
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Canada’s food guide,
for example
, has been making potential impacts on
people
’s diet as well as
sugar
consumption
 among the society.
As a result
, since 2000, the obesity rate in the country has decreased two-fold comparing to the
last
 few decades. In conclusion,
people
’s responsibility to limit
sugar
consumption
 cannot be efficient without
government
 involvement.
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