Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is individuals responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sugar

has been considered to be

a

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harm

for

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human

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body. In terms of making solutions for

sugar

intake,

government

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the government

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is expected to take action on society’s

sugar

consumption

.

On the other hand

, it is believed that

people

should have their own responsibility

on

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limiting the amount of

sugar

they consume. In my opinion, both ideas are rational but I strongly reckon with the fact that

government

takes a greater impact on the

consumption

of

sugar

. Nowadays, the appearance of

sugar

is rife

among

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our society and the food seems to be addictive to many

people

.

Although

sugar

is well-known for its harmful character,

however

, there is still a tremendous amount of

people

struggle

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with limiting

sugar

in their diet, and the major reason is lack of knowledge about

sugar

.

Sugar

can be in many forms other than granulated, it

also

appears in honey, maple syrup, canned food or frozen goods. There are many

people

who avoid granulated

sugar

but still consume other forms of

sugar

unconciously

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unconsciously

which makes them find it hard to limit the

sugar

intake. Because

people

’s actions towards

sugar

consumption

is

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not efficient due to the reason above,

thus

government

participation is crucial. In terms of

government’s

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the government’s

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responsibility towards

sugar

consumption

, raising

sugar

awareness for residents is a delicate solution.

For instance

, adolescent in Canada

are

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now prepared with knowledge in relation to

sugar

at school.

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Canada’s food guide,

for example

, has been making potential impacts on

people

’s diet as well as

sugar

consumption

among the society.

As a result

, since 2000, the obesity rate in the country has decreased two-fold comparing to the

last

few decades. In conclusion,

people

’s responsibility to limit

sugar

consumption

cannot be efficient without

government

involvement.