Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kings of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Over the past few years, there has been an increase in developmental
activities
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, which has have resulted in the building construction of new human habitats in rural
areas
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. It is essential that we take the initiative to safeguard these
areas
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from infrastructural development. Protecting the countryside is substantial essential for
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agricultural businesses.
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is because farmers depend on the undeveloped
land
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to carry out their farming
activities
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,
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as growing
food
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foodstuffs
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stuffs
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stuff
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items and rearing farm animals. Not only will farmers lose the
land
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for their business, but the wages that they gain from their farming
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,
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, by selling
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their farm produce, is lost, and
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, they end up not having any work to cater for to themselves and their families.
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, human and animal life is negatively affected if there is no food from agricultural
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for consumption, which humans
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need to grow and survive.
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, farmers may lose their source of income when new homes are built in rural
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. Using rural
areas
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for building purposes leads to environmental degradation. Most importantly, the
land
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loses most of its natural components,
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as the soil layers, when it is cleared with tractors, especially, during the preparation stages of making new developments which makes the
land
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not unable to withstand natural disasters.
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, these
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lead to the degradation of the environment,
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as
land
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erosion and air pollution, which results in flooding and sicknesses respectively.
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, infrastructural development practices,
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as the cutting down of trees which serves as the living space for a lot of animals,
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as birds, bats and squirrels, are destroyed.
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, life on our planet becomes endangered when new human habitats are built in the countryside. In conclusion, it is evident that pursuing developmental
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residential construction in rural environments will be detrimental to the planet earth. If we use up the
land
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space in the countryside to put up new homes, we may end up not having any space for both human and animal existence.
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