Some People Believe that a person's Culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are different types of
culture
in different countries.It is a big debate between the
socity
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is that some part of the population think that the tradition of the
the
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humans represents their birth
country
,but rest of the public are against with
this
statement.I have mentioned both of these views in
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paragraphs with my opinion. On the one side,
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believe that we can judge the origin of the community from
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lifestyle
.Every place
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the earth
have
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different types of
culture
.There
are
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number
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of nations in the world and their
lifestyle
is vary
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varies

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from place to place.So it is very easy to guess the birth origin of the
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society

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through their
culture
.
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,the choice of dressing
is depends
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depends

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upon the tradition of the
country
.
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is
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also varies

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also
vary from nation to nation.We can judge a person from their consuming habit. On the other side,some community believe that we cannot judge the birth
country
of anybody from their
lifestyle
.According to these people,
culture
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the culture
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of the human beings is depends upon the area where they are living presently not on
country
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.
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,
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of
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clothes
are
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changing
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to the atmosphere.Nowadays people adopted
the
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western
culture
.So it is very hard to guess the origin of
socity
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society

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from their
culture
. According to my point of view,
living
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standards of
the
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people are changing with technology.
New
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generation of a
country
adopt
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the
lifestyle
of
another countries
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.They want to know about the
culture
of various nations.
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