Although more and more people use public transport, some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. How can this problem be solved? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

These days,
increasingly
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numbers of
people
have started to
use
public
transport
, but there is still the
problem
of traffic jams
on
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some urban areas. As long as there are private cars, I guess the
problem
will persist.
This
essay will look at the ways in which the government and individuals could tackle
this
issue. To deal with
this
problem
,
people
should be encouraged to walk or to
use
non-motorised means,
such
as a bike, to move shorter distances. In turn, increasing spending on private cars should
also
be considered.
This
would not only minimize traffic congestion
,
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but
also
be beneficial to the environment. The downside of
this
solution,
people
with a medical condition related to their legs, would not be able to
use
bicycles and would have to
use
more costly modes of
transport
. An alternative solution to
this
problem
is that the government should provide adequate, clean and safe public
transport
services whereby more
people
will
use
public
transport
instead
of taking their own private vehicles. As at the moment, there are a growing number of overcrowded buses than there are roads with
transport
.
Therefore
, if the government solves
this
problem
,
people
will be able to get to where they need to go by public
transport
.
This
problem
has a negative side,
people
who are in a hurry and can't wait for the bus to get to the right station will have to
use
private cars or taxis and overpay. In the conclusion, nowadays urban centres and towns all over the world are experiencing serious
transport
problems. Most of
this
is related to growing populations and inferior public
transport
. Still, some things that governments could do to solve
this
problem
are to improve public
transport
, develop new neighbourhoods and persuade their residents to
use
bicycles,
for example
.
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