Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that these days,

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and housing

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have become more serious in a

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of megacities. Many people argue that relocating big corporations, factories and their workers to the rural areas could tackle these

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. In my opinion, I totally agree with

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view. The accommodating demand would be dealt with if a

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of large businesses, manufacturing sites and their human resources were moved to remote regions for some reasons.

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, a great

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of migrants move to cities to find new job opportunities, which leads to increased housing needs dramatically.

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, if the location of their workplace is relocated to the countryside, they will not be worried about the houses to live in.

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, in the rural countryside, there is an amount of living and manufacturing space enough to construct corporation’s factories as well as accommodate living space for their employees, which is beneficial for authorities in cities to deal with housing

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.

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, there are some reasons why

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problems

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will be addressed when facilities of many giant companies move to the rural regions.

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, it is evident that workers depend on their private vehicles to commute to

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sites in urban areas, which causes

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jams and negative accidents on road, especially in peak hour.

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, relocation of their workplace to the countryside would be a good way to deal with

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and a large

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of cars or motorbikes are decreased in the cities as well.

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, if the working locations of employees

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as factories or offices are moved to

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remote areas, many

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related to

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will be addressed.

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, the

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of exhaust fumes and noise pollution in metropolises caused by

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will decrease thanks to the method mentioned above. In conclusion, it is obvious that it is better to relocate the facilities of big businesses to remote regions to tackle

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and housing demands.