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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

#traffic #companies #factories #employees #countryside
It is true that these days,
traffic
 and housing
issues
 have become more serious in a
number
 of megacities. Many people argue that relocating big corporations, factories and their workers to the rural areas could tackle these
problems
. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 view. The accommodating demand would be dealt with if a
number
 of large businesses, manufacturing sites and their human resources were moved to remote regions for some reasons.
Firstly
, a great
number
 of migrants move to cities to find new job opportunities, which leads to increased housing needs dramatically.
Therefore
, if the location of their workplace is relocated to the countryside, they will not be worried about the houses to live in.
Furthermore
, in the rural countryside, there is an amount of living and manufacturing space enough to construct corporation’s factories as well as accommodate living space for their employees, which is beneficial for authorities in cities to deal with housing
issues
.
In addition
, there are some reasons why
traffic
problems
 will be addressed when facilities of many giant companies move to the rural regions.
Initially
, it is evident that workers depend on their private vehicles to commute to
working
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 sites in urban areas, which causes
traffic
 jams and negative accidents on road, especially in peak hour.
As a result
, relocation of their workplace to the countryside would be a good way to deal with
traffic
issues
 and a large
number
 of cars or motorbikes are decreased in the cities as well.
Moreover
, if the working locations of employees
such
 as factories or offices are moved to
the
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remote areas, many
problems
 related to
traffic
 will be addressed.
For example
, the
amount
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 of exhaust fumes and noise pollution in metropolises caused by
traffic
issues
 will decrease thanks to the method mentioned above. In conclusion, it is obvious that it is better to relocate the facilities of big businesses to remote regions to tackle
traffic
problems
 and housing demands.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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