Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that these days,

traffic

and housing

issues

have become more serious in a

number

of megacities. Many people argue that relocating big corporations, factories and their workers to the rural areas could tackle these

problems

. In my opinion, I totally agree with

this

view. The accommodating demand would be dealt with if a

number

of large businesses, manufacturing sites and their human resources were moved to remote regions for some reasons.

Firstly

, a great

number

of migrants move to cities to find new job opportunities, which leads to increased housing needs dramatically.

Therefore

, if the location of their workplace is relocated to the countryside, they will not be worried about the houses to live in.

Furthermore

, in the rural countryside, there is an amount of living and manufacturing space enough to construct corporation’s factories as well as accommodate living space for their employees, which is beneficial for authorities in cities to deal with housing

issues

.

In addition

, there are some reasons why

traffic

problems

will be addressed when facilities of many giant companies move to the rural regions.

Initially

, it is evident that workers depend on their private vehicles to commute to

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sites in urban areas, which causes

traffic

jams and negative accidents on road, especially in peak hour.

As a result

, relocation of their workplace to the countryside would be a good way to deal with

traffic

issues

and a large

number

of cars or motorbikes are decreased in the cities as well.

Moreover

, if the working locations of employees

such

as factories or offices are moved to

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remote areas, many

problems

related to

traffic

will be addressed.

For example

, the

amount

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of exhaust fumes and noise pollution in metropolises caused by

traffic

issues

will decrease thanks to the method mentioned above. In conclusion, it is obvious that it is better to relocate the facilities of big businesses to remote regions to tackle

traffic

problems

and housing demands.