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With fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Currently, because of the fast speed of life, people usually prefer
junk-
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junk food
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food
instead
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home-made
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homemade
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 dishes. In fact, the tendency to a quick lifestyle is inevitable, and our
food
behavior
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 is just a part of it. Anyway, we would try to find
pros
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the pros
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 and cons of fast
food
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 few paragraphs. On the one hand, a stressful and hectic lifestyle and tough deadlines
creates
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 enormous demand
on
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for
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easy
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 approachable satisfaction. Actually, if burgers and pizzas can help us to relieve negative moods and at the same time they are cheap and can be delivered fast, they would stay in great request for a long period of time.
For example
, if you work under the pressure 24 hours a day and you have no chance to relax normally, delivery from
McDonalds
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McDonald's
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 on your
lunch time
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lunchtime
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,
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 could become the best part of your day.
On the other hand
,
this
food
 is not wholesome for your body, because it can cause stomach aches, obesity and intestine troubles and other digestive problems.
Moreover
,if you do not control your consumption of non-useful meals,
this
 could lead to other diseases like diabetes or even become a reason for a heart attack.
For instance
, cola,
ice-cream
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ice cream
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 and
milk shakes
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milkshakes
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 are tasty, but the sugary drinks and desserts can have a giant impact on the appearance of 2-type diabetes. To conclude, from my point of view, drawbacks outweigh the benefits. I suppose that our health is crucial and if we do not want to destroy it with many tiny attacks from the inside, it is better to forget about junk
food
 forever.
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