Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Agriculture plays an imperative role in human's development.
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having the latest technologies in the field of crops, a myriad masses phases
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in the
world
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. There are problems with
hunger
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because of lack of awareness and
populace
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of country whereas there are some countermeasures
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as maintain the steady growth of
populace
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and impose strict rules on
food
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safety can do wonders to curd
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issue. I will explicate the problems and solutions of
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highly debatable issue in the following paragraphs. To commence with,
Hunger
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is one of the greatest challenges which can be seen in these recent years.
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is because of two major things. The
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and foremost factor is the lack of awareness related to agriculture in society.
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,
people
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waste foods usually which cause hungriness. For illustration, a survey conducts by the reputed television channel "BBC News" every year says that on average 5 million children lose their lives because of
hunger
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. Another obvious notorious factor of
hunger
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is that the enormous population of the
world
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. Due to
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, there are many countries that can not provide the basic essentials to their
people
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. As a consequence,
people
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are losing their lives because of the lack of resources especially the shortage of
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. To exemplify
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, in India there are more than 10 million
people
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who sleep without having
food
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in their supper.
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, there are mainly two steps we should take to overcome
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critical issue. The main step which we can take is that every government should take an initiative
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curb the massive growth of
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populace
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the populace
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. To combat
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situation, authorities should learn
people
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to maintain the population.
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exemplify
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, China the
world
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most populated country of the
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took
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in 1980 for stabilizing the number of
people
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and due to
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initiative
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the
populace
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of China become steady in recent year, which solve many problems of China including
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hungers
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favourable step is that government should come up with legislation on
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safety and impose
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penalty if
people
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disobey these rules.
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,
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a huge
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number of
people
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understand the value of
food
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and think twice before squandering the
food
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.
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, America comes up with
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for
restaurant
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a restaurant
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which says that a weekly allowance in wastage of
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should be
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lesser than 10 kg. If any restaurant could not follow
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rule
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they will impose
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on
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the restaurant's
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owner. To conclude,
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there is an excellent usage of technology in
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the agriculture
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sector, due to population and without proper insights of
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, there are
a lots
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of masses
does
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that does
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not have
food
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to eat.
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