Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Agriculture plays an imperative role in human's development.
Although
having the latest technologies in the field of crops, a myriad masses phases
hunger
in the
world
. There are problems with
hunger
because of lack of awareness and
populace
of country whereas there are some countermeasures
such
as maintain the steady growth of
populace
and impose strict rules on
food
safety can do wonders to curd
this
issue. I will explicate the problems and solutions of
this
highly debatable issue in the following paragraphs. To commence with,
Hunger
is one of the greatest challenges which can be seen in these recent years.
This
is because of two major things. The
first
and foremost factor is the lack of awareness related to agriculture in society.
As a result
,
people
waste foods usually which cause hungriness. For illustration, a survey conducts by the reputed television channel "BBC News" every year says that on average 5 million children lose their lives because of
hunger
. Another obvious notorious factor of
hunger
is that the enormous population of the
world
. Due to
this
, there are many countries that can not provide the basic essentials to their
people
. As a consequence,
people
are losing their lives because of the lack of resources especially the shortage of
food
. To exemplify
this
, in India there are more than 10 million
people
who sleep without having
food
in their supper.
However
, there are mainly two steps we should take to overcome
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this
critical issue. The main step which we can take is that every government should take an initiative
for
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curb the massive growth of
populace
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. To combat
this
situation, authorities should learn
people
to maintain the population.
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exemplify
this
, China the
world
most populated country of the
world
took
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in 1980 for stabilizing the number of
people
and due to
this
initiative
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the
populace
of China become steady in recent year, which solve many problems of China including
hungerness
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.
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favourable step is that government should come up with legislation on
food
safety and impose
heavy
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penalty if
people
disobey these rules.
Therefore
,
huge
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number of
people
understand the value of
food
and think twice before squandering the
food
.
For example
, America comes up with
rule
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for
restaurant
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a restaurant
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which says that a weekly allowance in wastage of
food
should be
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lesser than 10 kg. If any restaurant could not follow
this
rule
then
they will impose
penalty
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on
restaurant's
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owner. To conclude,
although
there is an excellent usage of technology in
agriculture
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sector, due to population and without proper insights of
people
, there are
a lots
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of masses
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not have
food
to eat.
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