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Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #students #time #activities
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There is the argument that extracurricular exercise
distract
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 undergraduate from their studies. It is evidence that extracurricular
activities
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 are beneficial for
students
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. There are numerous benefits of participating in extracurricular
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,
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 as developing good teamwork
skills
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, improving academic performance, and discovering a personal passion. Indeed, full-time
students
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 have to learn basic
skills
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 because it's their main task in school, The
college
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students
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, who need to get the required credits, and when they graduated from school. But it's full -
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students
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 can not ignore other
activities
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 like morality, intelligence, physique, beauty, and labour. After all, compared with those parts - time
students
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 are younger. They need more opportunities to go to practice their
skills
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.
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, in a school-like society,
students
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 should learn to cooperate, communicate
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 through teamwork.
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, full -
students
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 should do exercise work out. Compared with part-time
college
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students
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, they have more courses and consume more physical and mental energy. In conclusion, full -
College
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students
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 need to study hard and participate in other
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. They need to develop morally, intellectually, physically, aesthetically.
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