you have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company lossing an important client. write a letter to your senior director. in your letter apologise for what happened explain why you missed the dead line tell him her how will you avoid in future.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
letter to feel sorry for you because of my
mistake
which I did recently.
Actually
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I was unable to complete my work before the due date. I know that our company lost a good client because of my irresponsibility.I feel bad for
this
. I am working for the
last
two years in your company.It was my
first
mistake
.
This
happened because in that days I was very busy at my home.Actually,
last
month I was busy with my brother marriage.All the responsibilities of that function on me. So,I forgot to complete my office work. Believe me, it was the
first
and
last
mistake
of my life.In future,I will never do
this
mistake
again.I learn lots of
thing
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from that
mistake
.For the
next
time if I will have an emergency at home I will inform you before. Yours faithfully Manpreet Singh Bhullar
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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