Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Since the dawn of civilisation, climate change has been menacing life on earth.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, sea levels are rising dramatically.
This
Linking Words
essay will expound
the
Change preposition
on the
show examples
majors
Change to a genitive case
major's
majors'
show examples
issues of these including overuse of automobiles and cutting down of trees. It will
also
Linking Words
suggest solutions to these
problems
Use synonyms
including the limited usage of vehicles and afforestation. One of the major
problems
Use synonyms
responsible for
warming
Add an article
the warming
show examples
of the earth is reliance on
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
automobiles for transportation.
In addition
Linking Words
, cutting down of trees in large numbers. The carbon footprint from the vehicles results in massive amounts of carbon dioxide
to be
Change the verb form
being
show examples
released
in
Change preposition
into
show examples
the atmosphere;
however
Linking Words
, as the trees are being chopped down,
this
Linking Words
chemical remains in the atmosphere
that is
Linking Words
detrimental
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
the environment. As a consequence, the planet is turning hotter
day-by-day
Correct your spelling
day by day
show examples
, which, in turn, causes the ice to melt and turn into water,
for
Linking Words
example
Add the comma(s)
,example
show examples
ice caps of
Antartica
Correct your spelling
Antarctica
.
Nevertheless
Linking Words
, these
problems
Use synonyms
can be attenuated if people limit the usage of cars, motorbikes for commuting, and
instead
Linking Words
utilise bicycles as well as public transportation for travelling.
Moreover
Linking Words
,
development
Correct article usage
the development
show examples
of greenbelt worldwide could be prudent to diminish global warming.
This
Linking Words
is because
these help
Change the determiner
this help
show examples
restore
Change the verb form
restores
show examples
plants
which
Correct pronoun usage
that
show examples
would absorb the carbon dioxide and other harmful gases in the air. Thereby, turning
earth's
Correct article usage
the earth's
show examples
temperature to normal as well as
solidfying
Correct your spelling
solidifying
the water to its previous form. In conclusion, since modernisation, not only the change in climate but
also
Linking Words
the increase in water levels
continues
Change the verb form
continue
show examples
to threaten organisms.
This
Linking Words
essay examined how the former and the latter are caused by the radical use of transportation machines along with wiping out
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
greenery
Add an article
the greenery
show examples
.
Besides
Linking Words
, put forward the solutions to these
problems
Use synonyms
which are twofold: minimal utilisation of certain means of transport and
reforrestation
Correct your spelling
reforestation
deforestation
.
Submitted by ieltsspeaking760 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: