As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

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One of the factors that have emerged with the development of tourism is
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frequent
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flights. Air travel has a very negative impact on the environment and our nature. I believe that humanity and government together can solve
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. The solution to
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may be an increase in the
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of
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.
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, if
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understand that regular use of
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is not profitable financially, they will begin to look for other types of
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for short-distance travel.
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,
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to increasing
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for air travel, you can
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lower
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for road
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. Which may
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be an effective way. It will certainly be uncomfortable for humanity
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because planes save time and are more comfortable, but not everyone will use them regularly if their
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are high. The development of other methods of
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is one of the methods for solving
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. Trams and subways are developing rapidly in many countries.
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,
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are building underwater metro systems,
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will be able to move by terrestrial
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even through the seas and lakes.
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, the construction of
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a
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requires a large amount of finance from the government. In brief,
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transport
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of
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is harmful to the environment.
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, if certain steps are strictly taken to solve
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,
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the level of consumption of
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mode of
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can be reduced.
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