The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produces positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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It is undeniable that the growth of multinational entrepreneurs and rapid developing globalization
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significantly affected our daily life.
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, some believe that these changes bring individuals benefits. In my opinion, I support that the growing globalization has certain advantages to the society. I will discuss both the views in following up paragraphs and stand for my view.
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of all, the expanding multination companies benefit the markets and consumers. Since they provide a more competitive environment for the markets by increasing the variety of products. Meanwhile, the customers have more options for shopping without travelling miles away to buy overseas goods.
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, multinational companies and expanding globalization often offer more job opportunities for individuals. People are no longer limit by local employment chances.
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, working for multinational companies broaden people's horizon, which is mutually profitable for our community.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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