Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

World
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has become a global village in
21st
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century.
News
spread like
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speed of light from one country to another. Due to keen interest in enhancing viewership tally and publishing of those
news
chunks that are less highlighted, it has become quite evident that
news
editors opt for
those
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information
they
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that
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seem adequate.
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result
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, often bad
news
become
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part of our
news
stories, which indeed makes us accustomed to it.
Firstly
, gaining viewers directly affects the options available to any
news
channel. As
growth
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of
media
channels
rely on the number of views, certainly every
media
channel
then
tries to come forward with those bits of
information
that guarantee them
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maximum viewership.
For instance
, many
channels
are now content creating
such
dramas that suits the genre of
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their
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customers so that they remain intact with their
channels
.
Secondly
,
media
outlets try to edge their rivals by proceeding forward with
information
that is
unique in its nature. By producing
such
information
, it allows
to attract
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maximum views,
hence
enabling them to carry forward with
broadcast
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the broadcast
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of selective content of their choice.
For instance
,
ARY
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the ARY
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news
channel started airing Turkish drama, which due to its unique content has surged
their
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its
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customer base. More importantly, as selective
information
is played on Tv
channels
and newspapers, often we come across
negative
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a negative
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chunk of
informations
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information
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. Though
,
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such
information
does make rounds in
media
circles, the impact
of
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it remains dominant on
the
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society.
For instance
, rape cases being reported in Kasur put a mark on people's thought. Resultantly,whenever any
news
is heard from that region, people definitely get a negative vibe of it. In conclusion, it is quite apparent that television
channels
and other
media
outlets do opt for contents that interest them.
Moreover
, in order to put a better image of a country through
media
platforms, it is considered beneficial to report positive
information
rather than
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bad news
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news
.
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