Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to globalization, many

countries

are joining their hands with other

countries

to create win-win opportunities. The important factors for

developments

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the developments

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of poorer

countries

are enhancement in the area of health, education and trade.

However

, the law of other richer society should accept more responsibility to help the poorer

countries

in those

areas

.

Nonetheless

, in my opinion,

this

should not be at the expense of developments of their own

countries

. It is inevitable fact that developed

countries

spend millions of dollars

for

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research in different

areas

.

Although

,

this

money can

be spend

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for

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on

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development

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the development

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of

under developed

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underdeveloped

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and developing

countries

. The governments of richer

countries

can help poorer

nations

in the

areas

of health, education, trade etc. by providing aid for different purposes. They can enhance public health by providing advance medical facilities.

Moreover

, they should always embrace students in their

countries

by providing them

higher

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with higher

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education and liberalizing

visa

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the visa

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process.

This

would help their own

countries

as well. It may bring cultural diversity and a sense of tolerance among the people of their own

countries

.

For example

, the US government provides

funds

for aids patients in Uganda which is really helpful for

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under developed

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underdeveloped

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country like Uganda.

Nevertheless

, richer

countries

should not provide

funds

at the expense of

development

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the development

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of their own

nations

. The governments should appropriately estimate

budget

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the budget

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required for their own

countries

and

then

after

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only excess

funds

can be allocated for helping the poorer

nations

. In conclusion, the governments of richer

nations

should help poorer

nations

for development and improvement in different

areas

provided that they have excess

funds

and resources available to them.