In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

Planning babies in
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thirties or forties
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been in trend for the
last
few decades which ,in
modern
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era, is being
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by every one in three couples. While having
children
in later life is associated with quality nurture and personal amusement, it poses some adverse effects on mankind which if not resolved in
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manner can jeopardize the society we reside in. The probable reasons for
this
trend and how it can affect
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society and its individuals are elucidated in the following paragraphs. The prominent reason for the newly married couples to conceive late is the hectic lifestyle to make
the
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both ends meet in the materialistic world. Their desire to quench the never-ending thirst of becoming rich prevents them from giving birth to a child.
Furthermore
, the ever-expanding inflation makes it harder for
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individuals to nurture their
children
and manage the expenses when the source of income is limited.
This
scarcity compels them to work hard even after years of marriage, and they do not think of planning
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. The aforementioned reasons whether followed for being financially stable, are considered to impact the society and family in many ways.
Firstly
,
children
born after five to six years of marriage have to experience a huge generation gap.
This
is because when they bring up their child according to the learnings from their life, it sometimes creates a gap that never diminishes.
For example
, nearly half of the families are separating as the
children
are struggling with adapting to their parents’ lifestyle, according to
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of Statistics. To conclude,
although
the delay in childbirth is mainly attributed to stress from the economic side and becoming superior over others, the negative side of
this
trend cannot be
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over-looked
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as it may end up creating complications in
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healthy family relations.
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  • trend
  • developments
  • adulthood
  • education
  • career
  • financial stability
  • ready
  • start a family
  • assisted reproductive technologies
  • personal fulfillment
  • self-development
  • improved healthcare
  • life expectancies
  • cultural factors
  • religious factors
  • access
  • birth control methods
  • responsibilities
  • challenges
  • parenthood
  • influence
  • media
  • popular culture
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