Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.Which opinion do you agree with?Discuss both options and give example.
People are keeping pets
nowdays
because of increasing stress and anxiety but sometimes for the loving behaviour of Correct the word
nowadays
animals
. the dogs
and cats are on top of that list because children
like to play with them. animals
show love and affection towards their owner which is unconditional. In fact, children
feel more safe
with pets and enjoy their company Replace the words
safer
alot
. in some Correct your spelling
a lot
incidients
Correct your spelling
incidents
children
got injured due to aggressive behavior
of Change the spelling
behaviour
animals
. in the following paragraphs
we will take look Add a comma
,paragraphs
on
Change preposition
at
pros
and cons of housing Correct article usage
the pros
animals
.
It is seen in most of
Change preposition
apply
the
cases domestic Correct article usage
apply
animals
usually donot
attack their owner but under certain Correct your spelling
do not
don't
conditions
they can do so. People are more attracted towards aggressive Add a comma
,conditions
dogs
to save their property or farms. wild species of dogs
attack mostly because of their their
genetic ability to live in wild conditions. Remove the redundancy
apply
For instance
, a child was brutually
injured by Correct your spelling
brutally
pitbull
dog which can be dangerous and life Correct article usage
a pitbull
threating
. All Correct your spelling
threatening
this
happen because dog
got overexcited and attack her while playing. In America number of cases in which Add an article
the dog
some
Correct quantifier usage
apply
which some
Remove the redundancy
apply
dogs
variety are listed dangerous and the government is planning to ban those from pet animals
list.
Dogs
are loyal and safe but specialised training is required for them because of their wild instinct. I suggest to keep
Change the verb form
keeping
dogs
provided that the children
are not left alone with them. People needs
to know every about Change the verb form
need
dogs
behaviour before buying it to avoid any unprecedented intimidation. Children
should not be allowed to play with dogs
if they are below age
of 10 years to avoid any mishappening. guardians of Add an article
the age
dogs
must chain them if they are going outside their home.
It is concluded that dogs
are not safe for the
Correct article usage
apply
children
because of their aggressive instinct. Children
are also
not much aware about
the pet animal which is housed and any single mistake can risk their life. Prevention is important by following guidelines issued by the govt for better Change the preposition
of
managment
of pet Correct your spelling
management
animals
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