Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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celebrties'
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. In my opinion, it is limited effectiveness that celebrities draw attention to the problems. In Correct your spelling
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To begin
with, although
it is not all famous people
draw
attention to problems, there is a successful example Correct pronoun usage
who draw
such
as Bill Gates. He is devoting many environmental fields that close to our real life. For example
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countries
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in countries
This
successfully draw
the public attention to raise awareness of protecting our earth and supporting poor countries. Change the verb form
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Moreover
, there is a
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people
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is to say, as we know topics should spread to a broad range as much as they can. To find a popular star represent that would be an
access to approach the public easily.
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However
, this
way also
has drawbacks as well. First
of all, most of
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people
focus on those popular stars, not problematic its self. To be specific, Add an article
the people
global
organization try to highlight the topic Add an article
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such
as the life of wild
animal or poverty children, but Add an article
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interested on who involved in these projects. Correct your spelling
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Secondly
, it is claimed that to help corporations should avoid contracting with stars because paying or contrasting are more likely business deal which can easy to lose the importance on the case its self.
In conclusion, as mentioned above, although
having some positive effects, it is more likly
to bring concerns to the public. Correct your spelling
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Hence
, each organization should act wisely before hire
those famous celebrities.Change the verb form
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