Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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recent years, there has became more disputes regarding

celebrties'

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celebrities

effects on problems addressing through international aid organizations. Some

people

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argue

agree

that famous stars tend to lose importance about the issues, while others opposite the

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argument

. In my opinion, it is limited effectiveness that celebrities draw attention to the problems. In

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statements have mentioned above.

To begin

with,

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it is not all famous

people

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attention to problems, there is a successful example

such

as Bill Gates. He is devoting many environmental fields that close to our real life.

For example

, he has his own

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broadcast

and website to talk about climate changes, education, poverty

countries

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that need supports.

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successfully

draw

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the public attention to raise awareness of protecting our earth and supporting poor countries.

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, there is

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huge potential

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fans

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behind famous

people

.

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is to say, as we know topics should spread to a broad range as much as they can. To find a popular star represent that would be

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access to approach the public easily.

However

,

this

way

also

has drawbacks as well.

First

of all, most

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people

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focus on those popular stars, not problematic its self. To be specific,

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organization try to highlight the topic

such

as the life of

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animal or poverty children, but

people

jsut

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just

interested on who involved in these projects.

Secondly

, it is claimed that to help corporations should avoid contracting with stars because paying or contrasting are more likely business deal which can easy to lose the importance on the case its self. In conclusion, as mentioned above,

although

having some positive effects, it is more

likly

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likely

to bring concerns to the public.

Hence

, each organization should act wisely before

hire

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those famous celebrities.