It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

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of opinions in society that

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must get married not later than they are 30-years old. In

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me about

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huge community problem.

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of all,

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issue is really big because the young

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afraid of

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of things

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as they don't have well-paid jobs, they can be not well-educated or

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they haven't good

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accommodations

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. All these mentioned topics sometimes bother the generation to take the most important step in their life to have a family. In that

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they are trying to build their carrier and they are starting to think about children only after 35-years old when unfortunately their health not so good in

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time or can be other difficulties

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as their age in plus 10 years as

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would be another, not like

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who got birth to a baby in 25-years old.

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, as I had written before age is the main factor, so for community starts to have a

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gender

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gap. Due to

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problem governments are trying to plan some different

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programs

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like giving money for

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and

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kids, support families who have got up to 3 kids,

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they are going to enter some annually paid money before entering school,

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, in Russia. And if we speak about german's experience, they paid 300 euro per

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kid every month until they are 18-years old. To sum up, ideas which I mentioned earlier, I believe that I fully agree with

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statement that it is necessary to get married as soon as possible not to have

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of problems with your own health or with your baby's health in the future. So

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of countries now have a huge amount of social programmes not to

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afraid of the lack of money, they should think about their happy future with

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they in loved with.