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Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behaviour? Who do you think is responsible?

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Crime
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 rate has been increasing in a dramatic manner throughout the world.
This
 is mainly because of poor parental guidelines l and peer pressure that tends to
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 criminality in a person. I, personally, believe that
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both
society
 and family are equally blamed for
this
 scenario.
Firstly
, it is often considered that lack of parental
guiding
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 to children can lead
ill- mannered
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 behaviour.
This
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 the youngster rarely
to
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be educated when they do wrong deeds and they hardly understand the consequences of their pranks.
Similarly
, the youth is hugely influenced by virtual peer groups in a negative manner and often encourage to participate
illegal
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 activities.
For instance
, it has been noted that children of both working parents can be left alone at home and these youth may start to make online contacts. Eventually, they may end rackets that
sale
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 drugs, catfishing, and
cyber crimes
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cybercrimes
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.
Therefore
, the majority of culprits may have
history
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 of poor family instructions and infectious friendship.
Therefore
, I firmly, think that family and
society
 are the two factors that contribute
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such
 an extent. Regarding parents, they can spend more time with children, observe their behaviour closely and if the family finds any abnormality, they could instruct them how to overcome the challenge and show the right path.
Similary
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,
society
,
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should search
any
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 pitfall which hides in the community and takes appropriate actions against the predators in the virtual media as well. In conclusion, if
any one
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 commit
offenses
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,
may be
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 because of poor family instruction and
bad
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 friendship circle. I, strongly, believe that both
society
 and
family
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the family
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 of the convict are responsible for the same.
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