Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that animal species and feathered creatures have been vanishing at a much faster rate for about a decade.

Therefore

, few individuals

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society asserted that a huge quantity of

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and care must be used

for protecting

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all kinds of species. I am in complete accord with the given ideology and the reasons for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs with the relevant illustration. To commence with, there are numerous benefits which can be reaped from

this

development. First and foremost, wild

animals

and birds are beautiful creatures of nature that play a significant role in our bio-diversity. To explicate, with the existence of these species the ecosystem will be well maintained

therefore

it is imperative to make more use of

resources

to save pets and

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creatures.

As a result

, it aids

to maintain

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environment

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of the world. To exemplify,

according to

a survey done by the World

Protection

Organisation in 2019, 85% of wild

animals

saved

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in Uttrakhand, the state of India by providing additional

resources

for the survival of their lives. Thereby, it is essential to protect

creature

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of life for

well

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being of an ecological system.

In addition

to

this

, another significant factor of

this

approach is to

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the economy of the nation. Primarily, as wild

animals

have aesthetic appeal

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they should be used in the zoo for awareness among youth.

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visitors will get

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to explore their knowledge

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the science of zoology. To explain, the number of beasts

are

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decreasing at a rapid pace, it is pivotal to provide

protection

to them by applying more technologies.

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people will be excited to see

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hence

, travellers will pay

to

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zoo sections.

Consequently

, it will lead to the growth of the country in terms of financial

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factors

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.

For instance

, as per recent research done by the Indian Forest

Protection

System, with the intervention of local people

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millions of

resources

were established in Zim Combert National Park of Nainital, Uttrakhand

due to

which

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of tigers and elephants were saved.

Hence

, it can be shown from the above point that one should give extra attention to

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animals

and birds.

To conclude

, owing to reasons

such

as maintaining an ecological system and

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economy

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of the state, I am in favour of those who opine that too many

resources

and extra care ought to be devoted to the

protection

of wild

animals

and birds.