that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

It is some times argues parents should be responsible for the physical activities of their
children
than the
schools
. In my ,opinion it would be wrong for
schools
to only focus on studies.
Schools
are considered a
second
home for students. There should be all sorts of teaching in
schools
including sports. There are various things that pouil will learn by playing games a school.
Firstly
, sports help in the overall development of physical and mental health, if a student is only studying
then
they will not get
time
to relax and free their mind. They should be allowed to have separate
time
for physical exercise.
Secondly
, the institution should organise separate physical exercise session for students ,
for instance
, there can Yoga sessions on Saturdays for an hour which should be mandatory for everyone to attend. It's important for them to learn these habits at an early age.
Also
, in some , the institution they have separate subjects for students which allow them to learn the sport they like. Playing with other
children
will help them to learn how to coordinate with each other.
Thirdly
, when
children
are at home they are busy doing homework or going to extracurricular activities and maybe tuition classes. They do not have
time
for sports and, even parents do not have
time
to play with their
children
. To conclude,
schools
should provide a complete education for both the physical and mental development of a student.
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