Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
Creative
artists
should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever Use synonyms
way
they wish. There should be no public or government Use synonyms
restrictions
on what they do.
Creativity is a feature Use synonyms
which
comes inherently and needs freedom for expressing itself. Correct pronoun usage
that
Therefore
, I think that not only Linking Words
artists
but all creative Use synonyms
people
should always be given freedom but with some Use synonyms
restrictions
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
artists
have natural skills which help them to convey themselves in a beautiful Use synonyms
way
, to show the deficiencies of the environment Use synonyms
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
surrounding
them. Unfortunately, in several Change the form of the verb
surrounds
cases
their work of art restricted or banned by certain authorities. Add a comma
,cases
Moreover
, in some Linking Words
cases
they were threatened by the kings, presidents, prime ministers etc. Add a comma
,cases
For instance
, Azerbaijani writer Nasimi was threatened and murdered by the government nearly 500 years ago for his brave words.
Linking Words
Secondly
, we are Linking Words
people
and we have to be controlled because we live in communities and without Use synonyms
ruling
we should be confused. If some artist paints, writes or creates something without damaging Add a comma
,ruling
people
physically and mentally there will be no Use synonyms
restrictions
against him/her because we live in Use synonyms
a
21st century and we have some democratic laws. But every artist has to obey the rules and laws of his/her government. They can illustrate the real face of the system which they live in but without insulting somebody’s personality.
Change the article
the
Thirdly
, nowadays it is inevitable to face with films, pictures, poems which includes criticism, message etc. There are several regulatory bodies in every country which control, check these things. Undoubtedly, there some Linking Words
restrictions
which try to adjust their creativity but real Use synonyms
artists
don’t be afraid of any Use synonyms
restrictions
because of their thinking.
To sum up, Use synonyms
every
of us who lives in the world Change the determiner
every one
each
have
the right to be free. We born free because god creates us in that Change the verb form
has
way
. Expressing ourselves in a freely Use synonyms
way
our natural right, but, unfortunately in certain autocratic Use synonyms
countries
Add a comma
,countries
people
have to keep Use synonyms
silence
because they have not any choices. Especially, in these Replace the word
silent
countries
it is too hard to find real Add a comma
,countries
artists
because of the restriction.Use synonyms
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