The key solution for the environmental issues for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generation.T what extent do you agree or disagree?
Global warming and rise in
sea water
are the main problems of the countries.Some think that the best solution to the issues is that people living in Correct your spelling
seawater
today
's world should sacrifice their comfort for the benefit of young
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the young
generation
in the future. I clearly admit that life style
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
changes
are necessary but this
does not mean that current
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the current
generation
has to sacrifice their comforts.The lifestyle changes
may be beneficial to present
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the present
generation
as well as future
Add an article
the future
generation
.
The lifestyle changes
may not be burdensome.current
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The current
generation
should practice or follow the laws made by the local authorities. For
example
government implement the banning of plastic.Many people Add a comma
,example
today
have resorted to use
paper bags or cloth bagChange the verb form
using
,
when they go to Remove the comma
apply
supermarket
and even shop owners are doing Add an article
the supermarket
a supermarket
this
practice.This
rules
has not Change the determiner
rule
decrease
the quality of lifestyles of Change the verb form
decreased
current
Add an article
the current
generation
in any manner.Another guideline from government
is planting trees .Many young Add an article
the government
generation
of Change to a plural noun
generations
today
initiated the planting of trees in the roadsides or even in the mountains. Trees help purifying
the air, which is beneficial for the environment.It improves air quality and the current Change the verb form
to purify
generation
can breath
fresh air.
Replace the word
breathe
Local
government has Correct article usage
The local
also
asked people to reduce the use
of energy such
as practicing
Change the spelling
practising
to
Change preposition
apply
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turn off
turn-off
the lights when not in Correct your spelling
turn off
use
and unplug the sockets after use
,
because some appliances are still consuming electricity even after Remove the comma
apply
use
.This
can save us money as well.Having own car is a symbol of lifestyles but we should restrict it for using
, Replace the word
use
instead
we can Add a comma
,instead
use
public transporation
, by doing Correct your spelling
transportation
this
we help environment
emitting greenhouse gases into Correct article usage
the environment
atmosphere
which causes global warming.
The current Add an article
the atmosphere
generation
can practice this
rules but it does not cause any discomfort in any manner.
In my opinion, it is true that Correct determiner usage
these
today
's generation
has to make lifestyle changes
to lessen environmental
problem, Add an article
the environmental
however
Add a comma
,however
i
truly disagree that these Change the capitalization
I
changes
would decrease the comfort level of the current generation
. They are creating a better world for future generation
without making any compromise on their comfort.Submitted by salenatorres on
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