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Nowadays many families moves overseas for job opportunities. Some people think its beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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It is sometimes argued that parents immigration to a foreign country is benefitting their
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 or it is making their
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 suffer. I will discuss both opinions and, explain why I believe that moving overseas will have a good impact on the
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's future. At times, folk favours
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 decision of moving abroad, and there are a plethora of reasons.
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, parents are securing their
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's future knowing that they would be exposed to job opportunities if, they would involve in the busy atmosphere at their early age. Another reason could be the new custom, the more the
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 get to know the foreign culture, the sooner he will be knowing how to live a social life.
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, the
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 will make friends from different culture and will respect other religion.
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, communication will be improved as they will be learning a new language in their prime age only.
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, at times,
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 moving overseas decision is not considered good. The cause of
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 could be stress.
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, a teenager will be worn out experiencing a sudden change in his life. Hardly a few can adapt to changing circumstances.
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, from education to living standard, everything will be different and getting along with other teenagers could
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 lead to depression. A considerable example is a
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 could be bullied based on his caste, race, or language. Getting over
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 harsh comments won't be easy for them. In my opinion, living abroad is a good choice for a
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's development because the adolescent will learn things on their own. They will be exposed to the real world and will get independent in no time. They will not only be developing but will be living their dreams, down the line.
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