With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be open up to access more resources. To what extend do you agree?

In

this

modern times,

oil

and gas improve many nations economy .A vast number of masses vocalise that undiscovered places of the globe should be open up in order to boost the intake of these resources.

However

,I agree with

this

notion.

To begin

with,we all know that in pandemic times

this

sort of material become only hope for many countries to save their downfall.since

this

type of stuff has enormous value in the market they

also

use in humans living in

a

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various way

therefore

, it is very important for the government to find out new areas to take materials so there will be no shortage and suppliers will

also

able to fulfil everyone's need. On the other side ,by doing these the prices of goods will

be remain

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in

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limit

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.

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, research provides details that about 55%of crux

happen

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because of the less production of gas and

oil

.

thus

it clear that it will be significant for individuals to invent alternative areas for

oil

and gas conduction. On the opposite,

although

this

kind of stuff

are

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very beneficial for human it will be completely preposterous decision to destroy many places just for taking

this things

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as it can

effect

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many peoples

live

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they can become homeless.

for instance

, it is

noticeble

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noticeable

that around 24% of masses have to leave their house in

mongolia

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for the constitution of

oil

.

Thats

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why a number of

sapporter

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supporter

sapport

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support

this things

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as

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wrong . in conclusion,I would say even though it is affecting poor guys badly as their have to live in other houses but we can not

shadowed

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its significance

thus

I reckon it is

good

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decision to discover sites for

take

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resources.