Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons…experience.

Schools play
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role in everyone's life.
A child
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roots
are basically start
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from schools.In
school
,
children
learn
lot
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of things and
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foreign
foriegn
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a foriegn
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language
is one of them. Some individuals think that a foreign
laguage
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language
is better to start from
primary
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stage but others confront it with that secondary
school
is
a
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best stage to teach students any foreign
language
. I will
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my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with,
this
trend has one of great benefit is that offsets feel
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from
begining
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beginning
because they use to of foreign
laguage
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language
so they could not feel
incidenly
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incident
pressure on
themselfs
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themselves
from secondary
school
.
Secondly
,
Children
can become
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independent
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means there
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less
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chances to call parents for talking to someone because they can speak
foreign
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a foreign
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language
for instance
- English is
the
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foreign
language
which is
also
a
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international
language
so it has more benefits than demerits
on
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future
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of students. On the other side of the mirror,
primary
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the primary
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stage is a golden period of life because of
chlidhood
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childhood
.In
this
time
children
should be play sports or learn basic things But if we put
burden
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the burden
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on them of foreign
language
which could be
effect
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the effect
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on child's health.
Moreover
,coin spin and with every
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a new change
come
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means that with
age
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of
children
mind
also
develop in rapidly which makes easy to learn any
language
.
For example
, you can ask any teenager about any subject and you get reply fastly than
children
. I personally believed that
this
new development has more benefits than demerits.I can suggest that a foreign
language
would be optional in primary
school
but in secondary it teach
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same
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way like
present
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.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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