Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, the number of

workers

who suffer from

health

problems is rapidly increasing. The potential reason for

that is

not having sufficient

exercise

on a regular basis.

That is

probably because the majority of

workers

or employees do not have adequate

time

as well as motivation. In my opinion,

employers

along with

governments

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should take the precautions of providing their

workers

with more places for exercising. The reasons why the wide range of

workers

do not have enough

exercise

have stemmed from lack of

time

and motivation. As we are living in a competitive world, all individuals have to work as hard as they can, so

this

put so much pressure on them which drains their stamina. As a consequence, it makes them feel anxious and unmotivated about exercising even when they are in their leisure

time

. A good illustration of

this

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white collars who are obliged to sit in front of their computers for long hours and put their

health

in danger.

Moreover

, some groups of

workers

like stock traders have to work without free

time

.

Such

occupations are most harmful

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body

health

because they cannot spend sufficient

time

for

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exercising which is crucial for having

healthy

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body. In my opinion, to tackle

such

problems,

employers

and

governments

should work in associated with each other and provide their employees and

workers

with proper conditions and facilities to

exercise

regularly. To start with,

governments

should construct more places for outdoor activities like tennis courts, basketball courts and etc. If

such

places are more accessible, people will be keen to do sports,

accordingly

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the general

health

of

workers

will increase.

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employers

should enforce some regulations by considering their employees’

health

.

Although

companies are always competing with each other, nothing can be more important than their

workers

’

health

. Companies should dedicate their

workers

some free

time

, so they can spend it on their

health

by doing

workout

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. The

more

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healthier

workers

companies have, the more likely they win their competition. To sum up, the general

health

of

workers

is deteriorating faster than ever,

this

is because a large group of these people do not have adequate

exercise

.

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potential reasons for that can be

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of

time

and motivation. To solve

such

problems, the best way can be that

governments

should provide more

sport

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facilities.

Employers

are better to pay more attention to their

workers

’

health

by appropriate regulations.