There seems to be increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent many people believe that the other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is argued by some that the

death

penalty is the best solution for fighting the ever-growing rate of

crime

, mainly due to the fear it can create among criminals, while others disagree. In my opinion,

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countries

should seek

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other solutions, as taking life is morally wrong, regardless

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the type of

crime

comitted

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committed

. On the one hand, some hold the view that the

death

sentence is the ultimate way to decrease the

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of serious crimes

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because it creates fear among criminals.

In other words

, potential offenders and gangsters would probably think twice before they commit rape or an armed robbery, whilst knowing the penalty for these actions could be

death

.

For example

, studies have shown that the rate of

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homicides

has dropped significantly in countries

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have embraced the

death

penalty.

On the other hand

, others believe that a

death

sentence is morally wrong, and I agree with

this

statement. The fact that a court or a judge can decide whether a certain individual will live or die, no matter which

crime

he or she has committed, is a source for many

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arguments

, and some think that

such

decisions are fundamentally

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wrong

.

For instance

, a survey from Oxford’s university has shown that the majority of the population in England

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that

death

penalties should be banned and stated that moral conflicts are the main reason. In conclusion,

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although

views differ,

This

essay believes that countries should stop conducting executions of criminals, because

this

action is wrong from a

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moral

morally

prespective

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perspective

, and should find other ways of confronting the latest rise in

crime

rates.