Nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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number of people argue that engaging in different activities at the same time

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studying is of the same importance for

students

who have full-time scheduled university lessons. While focusing on studies is a vital part of the improvement of

students

, I believe that they should spare some time on socializing and

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in internships, as well. Obviously, nowadays, universities offer highly specialized curriculum for different fields which helps

students

to develop not only

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their profession

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but

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acquire knowledge about other subjects of their interest.

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approach has helped

students

to experience various interesting parts of different courses,

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students

who pursue economics

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can easily attend

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lab classes and participate in experiments.

Additionally

, due to the strict requirements of professors,

students

need to read dozens of books, prepare

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amount of course work, in order to be ready for their examination period.

Consequently

,

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tendency helped

students

to formulate

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point of view of their potential future career.

On the other hand

, their schedules are so complicated that,

students

are more likely to focus merely on their studies and ignore other possible activities they can do.

First

of all, starting from freshman years

students

need to participate in various sports games, short-term

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of their interest, volunteering programs for enlarging their networking and nurturing their young soul. Following that, participating in summer internship programs on their majority would be a life-changing point for their career path. In

this

way, they can put already acquired theoretical knowledge into work, and decide if they have chosen the perfect fit for them.

As a result

of

this

,

students

can eliminate the risk of late changes in their future career and start their journey when they are fresh. In conclusion, focusing on studies is a vital part of university years

however

students

should not neglect the importance of socializing and hands-on experiment

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their field in order to have both theoretical and practical knowledge.