Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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It is often said that both genders should have
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role and opportunity to
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in
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firms and armed
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. I completely agree with
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opinion
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and support the idea that females should be allowed to
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alongside male candidates.
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, In the 21st century, every member of the house is expected to
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which will not only benefit self-development
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but
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add to total household income. On that note, If the females are demotivated by not encouraging them to
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on
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platform as men,
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it sabotages the growth of woman culture.
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, if the
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are debarred from participating in
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academy and other
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institutions, it will reduce their development.
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, more efforts should be made for their involvement
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armed
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forces
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to that, based on the concept of gender equality, every woman is not equal to a man in terms of both mental and physical form.
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,
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can very well excel
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duty and tasks assigned to them as compared to man. Based on that, fighting for justice against outlaws and defending the lives of citizens can be very well taken by the
women
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, night patrolling duty by police stations and other
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organizations can be done both by male and female.
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, armed
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can hire and offer roles to fight against criminal offences To summarize,
women
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can
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on equivalent platform and designation on the
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and armed
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without any considerable doubts and in my opinion, they should be very well granted equal roles.
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