Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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punishing the offender would be an effective method to tackle
this
issue, the opponents think that implementing other measures could be eliminated the problem significantly. In my opinion, I, personally, support the former’s view since the punishment
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. On one hand, when a culprit is sentenced or fined for violating traffic rules or speed driving would allow him to repent his mistakes while serving a jail term. The price of
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small negligence may cost the life of a person, so stringent law enforcement is
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without wearing a helmet is a punishable offence in India. Even though giving multiple warnings,
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most of the offenders tend to repeat the mistakes over again and again.
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administering stricter rules and punishments would minimise
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enforcing other tactics would decrease traffic violations. They tend to believe that lack of awareness of traffic rules and safety measures are the real causative factors of the violation. For
this
, providing free education and conducting skill updating classes to drivers on a regular basis can be introduced.
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, not only are these methods rarely successful, but
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huge funding and
people
may not value the significance.
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, implementing these kinds of educations surely require experts and modern teaching facilities, which may not be feasible most of the time. In conclusion,
people
have a different opinion on whether giving punishments or implementing some other methods would reduce the offenders. I, firmly, think that stringent punishment would eliminate the problem effectively.
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