Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people suggest that seeking a way to go along with
climate
change
outweigh prevention of it. I oppose
this
view and believe we should take bolder action towards it.
First
and foremost,
climate
change
is detrimental. Researches and studies have proved that
climate
change
will lead to the devastation of human civilisation. The escalating increase of temperatures
for example
, which contribute to glaciers melting and sea level rising will sink seashores and islands underwater and force people to emigrate and lose inhabitable lands.
Similarly
, extreme weather which has become more frequent and common is causing floods, land sliding and droughts.
Also
, deforestation due to the needs for human inhabitation is
further
deteriorating air quality and accelerating pollution.
Consequently
, there will be no place for us to survive.
However
, despite the impractical idea of living with it,
climate
change
is still reversible. In the past decades, governments have set up goals and aim for the target to keep temperatures rise under 2 degree. If we could keep carbon underground by eliminating fossil fuel usage and planting trees,
for instance
, the nature circle could regain its resilience and sustainability. In fact, people have been living with gradual
climate
change
for years and realised more drastic and pragmatic.
Therefore
, fostering the transition of renewable energy and sustainable food system by stopping the funding of high-polluting industry and fishing are strongly appealed for. In conclusion, I believe intervention is a better measure to protect our environment and keep it inhabitable for
human
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being.
Thus
, both the government and individuals should work together to achieve the goals.

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