Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spent most of the time indoors and have little exposure to the nature. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons of your answers and give relevant example of your experience.
The noun phrase toddler seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The spelling of humor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The word Fore doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It appears that the verb achieves should be in the base form as part of the to-infinitive following tends. Consider changing the verb form.
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