You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

Dear Mr Scrooge, I am writing
this
letter to request the refundable deposit of One Lakh Rupees, which was paid during signing our tenancy agreement. Since we do not have sufficient time, I would appreciate it, if you can pay the same back at the earliest. As you are aware, we are migrating to Canada, and do not have sufficient time. As mentioned in the tenancy, we have returned the apartment in the same neat condition as how it was given to us. It is only fair
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your end to keep up the deal. I demand the amount to be transferred to me through an online banking method, which will be convenient for my expenditure. In the event that there is no reply from you on
this
matter, please note that I will take it up with the civil court and that I have all the necessary and supporting documents. I hope we can work
this
out amicably. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Alex.
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