In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Some people argue that the government should be responsible for covering the full cost of these services. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.

It is often argued by some that the government ought to take responsibility in
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the
health
care
and
education
services
,
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since it has been observed that in some nations these
services
are not fully covered by the state. I totally agree with
this
statement because it fosters equality and economic growth
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different countries. To commence with, if the administration covers the medical management and schooling funds in full it will deter discrimination.
This
is because most disadvantaged people are not able to access these facilities due to lack of money and only those who are rich will benefit.
Therefore
, by scrapping the payments everyone will have equal opportunity to go to school, especially tertiary
education
.
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, the Herald newspaper reported in 2018 that 50% of deserving students fail to go to college because of exorbitant
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fees.
Thus
, when the ministry takes
care
of the payments, everybody will be able to go to hospitals and schools
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of their background.
Furthermore
, the covering of the
health
care
and
education
services
by the government is advantageous to the economy and society in the long run. When everyone has an opportunity to learn and can access the medical facilities ,it will benefit the country by having educated and healthy individuals.
In other words
, having a greater resource of skilled and knowledgeable
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will bring greater rewards to
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society as a whole, particularly when the people are physically fit.
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, the Republic of Cuba invested in educating its citizens and
thus
, completely transforming the economy. In conclusion, the
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participation of the administration in funding
health
and
education
services
is essential as it nullifies
discrimation
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discrimination

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by allowing equal access by either rich or poor individuals . The benefits of free
education
and free
health
care
will be recouped many times over.

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