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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Technology
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flourishing
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nowadays. There are many labour-saving
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 had designed
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reduce
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 the amount of
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 or effort
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dishwahers
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dishwashers
 and communication tools and computer.
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, a fair amount of people believe that these devices can make our lives too easy but others argue that
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 only creates more
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Technology
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 can assist to our
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 in
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 to modern
technology
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 can reduce the stress
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undoubtedly
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artificial electronic devices are able to save our time and
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energy
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to
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people are
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gotten
 more relax compare to those days. In
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around the world without going outside and we can
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 that many business meetings
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 conducts video conferencing-oriented.
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development
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to
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 the population
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 not put more effort to do any
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 because
technology
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 is saved our job time and energy too.
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, according to the survey says more than 90% of the companies are
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to
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 machinery in their daily
work
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, advanced
technology
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is boost
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 up to
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human life. All credit goes to
technology
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 because
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 only can reduce our
work
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 pressure. In ,addition, house chores are finished within few minutes by
technology
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such
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 as dishwashers, washing machines.
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, computer
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 able to diminish our job time
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computer
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is very fast compare
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 to human and
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 can save tons of information without any error in
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public can live a peaceful and happy life
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 without stress life. To conclude, irrefutably, labour-saving devices are given
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 benefits to
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 individual.
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 world has changed how
technology
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hence
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 society
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 had to change and
addopt
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adopt
 modern
technology
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 but changes
is
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 the best alternatives for every problem so the people can shrink their depression level by
technology
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