Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology
is
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flourishing
by leaps and bounds
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nowadays. There are many labour-saving
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had designed
for
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reduce
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the amount of
work
or effort
such
as
dishwahers
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dishwashers
and communication tools and computer.
However
, a fair amount of people believe that these devices can make our lives too easy but others argue that
these machinery
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only creates more
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.
Technology
can assist to our
live
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in
order
to modern
technology
can reduce the stress
undoubtdely
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undoubtedly
.
To begin
with,
the
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artificial electronic devices are able to save our time and
enegry
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energy
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the
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people are
gotton
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gotten
more relax compare to those days. In
this
modern era, we can easily communicate
to
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around the world without going outside and we can
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that many business meetings
also
conducts video conferencing-oriented.
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is a positive
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development
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to
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the population
do
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not put more effort to do any
work
because
technology
is saved our job time and energy too.
For example
, according to the survey says more than 90% of the companies are
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to
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machinery in their daily
work
.
Moreover
, advanced
technology
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up to
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human life. All credit goes to
technology
because
this
only can reduce our
work
pressure. In ,addition, house chores are finished within few minutes by
technology
such
as dishwashers, washing machines.
Furthermore
, computer
are
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able to diminish our job time
this
means
computer
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is very fast compare
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to human and
this
can save tons of information without any error in
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to
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public can live a peaceful and happy life
in other words
without stress life. To conclude, irrefutably, labour-saving devices are given
most
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benefits to
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individual.
This
world has changed how
technology
hence
society
also
had to change and
addopt
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adopt
modern
technology
but changes
is
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the best alternatives for every problem so the people can shrink their depression level by
technology
.
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