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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

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In the modern era,a world faces a huge number of health issues, so
people
 become more serious about their
fitness
. Some individuals use
fitness
 centres while others believe that their daily
work
 routine is more important for their
fitness
. We will discuss both aspects in
this
 passage.
Firstly
,
people
 choose a mode of
fitness
 according to their
work
 routine.
For instance
, If somebody working in an office and he has a sitting job that person has more chances to join a gym because he or she will get chance to do all type of exercises under a single roof.
Moreover
 , they will get more equipment or machines to hit a particular muscle in our body. In that way, they will make more attractive muscles. In comparison, If anybody has that type of
work
 in which he or she has to walk all day or run or climbing
then
 they do not need to join any
fitness
 club because they already burnt their most of calories during their
work
.
Although
 , they do not have sufficient energy after
this
 type of
work
 so he or they can join a gym. According to research , a
people
 who have physically challenging
work
 they have more
fitness
 level rather than gym membership
people
. In conclusion, I would like to say that both methods have their own importance and both methods are good or beneficial to become a fit.
People
 can reach their
fitness
 goals by using any method and a selection of
fitness
 method depends upon their daily routine or their interest.
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