Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animal which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree ?

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human

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calamity

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take care

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rights to live in the plant look like human but many optimistic persons are said we should keep from harsh

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which are only beneficial and others remaining is not

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necessary

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, the Indian government is

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especially Tiger.

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public and the ministry both are together to conserve for all

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not only gainful but

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ungainful.

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, many developed countries are being protected

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by zoos and We can see that many

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before while those people would save now

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generation have a chance to see

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of watching movies. To conclude,

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forest and hills are looking very attractive and fruitful. We have to do for

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to the ruination

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because future generation people will see and know about all

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years more beasts had extinction without proper measures.

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, Today folks are should be saving all kinds of

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species.

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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animal which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree ?

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