In many countries, school children are required to wear school uniforms. Do you think this should be enforced in all schools? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

School
uniforms
have been a part of most private
schools
in the country whereas most to all of the public
schools
do not have
this
requirement. I strongly advocate imposing
school
uniforms
as mandatory throughout the
schools
in the country The
first
key issue that could be diminished by proposing
school
uniforms
is bullying. As evidence states that in most of the
schools
, based on the appearance of a student, they are categorized as 'popular' or 'nerds', which after a point leads to constant bullying. By enforcing
uniforms
, the appearance remains constant throughout the
school
. Apart from
this
, it
also
reduces the time spent on picking clothes every day and develops a sense of responsibility in a child to maintain or iron their
uniform
, and polish shoes every day. Despite
this
, there is a downside. It could be potentially difficult to maintain one type of
uniform
in a place that has extreme weather conditions and would lead to being expensive if parents have to purchase different types of
uniform
for every season. On many, occasions it could
also
turn out to be difficult for households with both parents working to maintain a
school
uniform
. To conclude, I still strongly support the idea for imposing
school
uniforms
provided if it is provided by the
schools
themselves and not to be an expense for the parents especially in public
schools
.

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