Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is ? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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What measures can governments take to discourage
people
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from using their
cars
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? Nowadays,
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mostly
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most
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people
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are in hurry up. In the past 3
decades
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the owner of
the
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apply
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cars
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are rising speedily and
number
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a number
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of cities are facing
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traffic
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a traffic
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jam
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problem. Government should take which steps to motivate
people
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to
use
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public
transport
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instead
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of four wheels
is
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are
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mentioned in
below
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the below
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paragraphs. I am
nuetral
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neutral
with
this
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statement. In
this
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modern era,
people
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have very busy schedule
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they do not have
time
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and because of
it
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they prefer to
use
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car
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or motorcycle
instead
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of public
transport
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where the public
transport
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is cheaper than
the vehicles fuel
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the vehicle's fuel
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. Because of their busy
schedule
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they prefer to travel
into
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in
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their own
cars
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and if they are not able with own
car
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so
use
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cab facility.
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the main reason
of
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increasing
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the increasing
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car
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number of car
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owners.
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facility some benefits.
People
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can save their
time
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also
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they can complete their work on
time
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which is not possible with public vehicles.
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, Times of India published
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article
last
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month, In that one person need O+ blood which is not available in his city so his relative travel 200km in 2 hours with his 4 wheels so the doctor can save his life on
time
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.
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, If
this
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facility has the advantage so it has
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some disadvantage. These days
traffic
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jam
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problems
is
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very
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a very
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big issue.
People
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are facing too
much
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many
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problems due to it.
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, air pollution is rising and due to
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citizens are suffering from asthma and oxygen problems.
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,
last
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year in China, two persons died in the ambulance because the medical van is kept in
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traffic
taffic
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a taffic
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jam
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and it was not found the way because the
traffic
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jam
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was 5km long. The government is
also
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trying to solve
this
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major problem and
also
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taking steps on it like advertising news on it and publish in newspaper and on television.
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, motivating nationality to
use
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public
transport
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mode as much as possible and requesting to
use
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bicycle
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a bicycle
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if possible. If we take an example so,
last
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year in
city
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the city
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Delhi
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of Delhi
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India, the government starts
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odd-even
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an odd
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odd
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oddly
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even system for motor vehicles. Odd number's
car
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can drive on odd days and
same
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the same
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as even number
cars
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can drive on even days. In conclusion, to take care about pollution and
traffic
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jam
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issue is completely on the population of the nation. Nationality should
use
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buses and trains for long travel and bicycle for
short
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a short
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distance as much as possible so, it will be beneficial for all.
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