Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is ? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
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What measures can governments take to discourage
people
from using their cars
? Nowadays, Replace the word
most
mostly
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most
people
are in hurry up. In the past 3 decades
the owner of Add a comma
,decades
the
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apply
cars
are rising speedily and number
of cities are facing Change the article
a number
the number
traffic
Correct article usage
a traffic
jam
problem. Government should take which steps to motivate people
to use
public transport
instead
of four wheels is
mentioned in Change the verb form
are
below
paragraphs. I am Correct article usage
the below
nuetral
with Correct your spelling
neutral
this
statement.
In this
modern era, people
have very busy schedule also
they do not have time
and because of it
they prefer to Add a comma
,it
use
car
or motorcycle instead
of public transport
where the public transport
is cheaper than the vehicles fuel
. Because of their busy Change to a genitive case
the vehicle's fuel
the vehicles' fuel
schedule
they prefer to travel Add a comma
,schedule
into
their own Change preposition
in
cars
and if they are not able with own car
so use
cab facility. That is
the main reason of
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for
increasing
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the increasing
car
owners. Correct quantifier usage
number of car
This
facility some benefits. People
can save their time
also
they can complete their work on time
which is not possible with public vehicles. For instance
, Times of India published a
article Change the article
an
last
month, In that one person need O+ blood which is not available in his city so his relative travel 200km in 2 hours with his 4 wheels so the doctor can save his life on time
.
However
, If this
facility has the advantage so it has also
some disadvantage. These days traffic
jam
problems is
Change the verb form
are
very
big issue. Add an article
a very
the very
People
are facing too much
problems due to it. Change the quantifier
many
Also
, air pollution is rising and due to it
citizens are suffering from asthma and oxygen problems. Add a comma
,it
For example
, last
year in China, two persons died in the ambulance because the medical van is kept in Correct your spelling
traffic
taffic
Correct article usage
a taffic
jam
and it was not found the way because the traffic
jam
was 5km long.
The government is also
trying to solve this
major problem and also
taking steps on it like advertising news on it and publish in newspaper and on television. Also
, motivating nationality to use
public transport
mode as much as possible and requesting to use
bicycle
if possible. If we take an example so, Add an article
a bicycle
last
year in city
Correct article usage
the city
Delhi
India, the government starts Change preposition
of Delhi
Add a hyphen
odd-even
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an odd
odd
even system for motor vehicles. Odd number's Change the adjective
oddly
car
can drive on odd days and same
as even number Correct article usage
the same
cars
can drive on even days.
In conclusion, to take care about pollution and traffic
jam
issue is completely on the population of the nation. Nationality should use
buses and trains for long travel and bicycle for short
distance as much as possible so, it will be beneficial for all.Add an article
a short
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