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In spite of advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry . Why is this the cause ? What can be done about this problem ?

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 , recently ,
agriculture
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 industry has developed , many hungry people
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 been observed in the world . In the following essay , the reasons if
this
 issue and its' solution will be argued . The most
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 full reason for observing people starveling
arround
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around
 the world would be the fact that
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it is true that some advances saw in
agriculture
 but providing them is expensive and it will not be possible or available
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every one
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.
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 instance , some technological and advanced
devises
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 for irrigation has been produced by some organizations they purchasing them is difficult for farmers because of heavy costs .
Additionally
 , poverty is another cause of creating hunger . As an example , apparently , if people do not have
proper
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 financial situation , they will not be able to consume agricultural advances and provide their needs or foods. So , if poverty and expensively in
agriculture
 industries are seen in countries ,
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the public
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 will have been hungry by the
next
 10 or 20 years . A pleasant collaboration between governments and managements in companies and
agriculture
 industries would be
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a perfect solution to reduce
starving
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starvation
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by establishing some financial principles .
Fore
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 example , seeming loans for farmers to
by
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buy
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 advanced vehicles for their farms or fields .
Moreover
 , increasing job positions for poor communities in the weak areas to create
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suitable
incomes
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 for the
poors
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poor
. In conclusion , poverty and high prices in
agriculture
 would be the main causes for appraising
atsrvation
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reservation
 .
Furthermore
 ,
this
 problem can not be solved , unless by imposing some financial laws and making a job for
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the poor
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 public .
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