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School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#school #teachers #development #students #parents
Educational
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 methodology has been changed over the
last
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 oriented world, it is argued that educators have
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prominent
prominant
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 role in the entire nourishment of the pupil than a mother and a father.
However
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incredibly
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 important role in
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 as well as thoughtful growth of the children, as they are
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 part of their wards
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Hence
, I completely disagree with the aforesaid notion.
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To begin
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first
 and foremost perspective of
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 life is proper education in terms of behavioural as well as
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cognitive
 abilities. The entire familial
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dedicates
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 in
child
's behavioural pattern
besides
this
, the teacher is needed to support the
cognative
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cognitive
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development
 of a pupil through
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a guided
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 pattern of learning. According to
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 Society of Paediatrics, New York, 78% of students who showed excellent morals and ethics were from
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 families. On top of that, the most
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brilliant
 students were, 80 % who
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 belonged to renowned educational institutes across the globe. That's how
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not
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only
 teachers but
also
parents
 are
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vitally
 impactful for
upbringing
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 of the
child
.
Secondly
, the
curriculam
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curriculum
 taught in the school must be revised at home to enhance the scores of the students. The alert and attentive
parents
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 to guide their babies for the same. The article published in Times of India on 5th September 2020,
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revealed
travelled
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interviwing
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interviewing
 1000 pupil who
achived
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achieved
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colligues
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colleagues
, it was found that, 90% of them were regularly doing school homework and
recevied
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received
 extraordinary time and guidance from their
parents
.
Hence
, providing better education to the upcoming generation is a collective measure of guardians as well as masters rather than a single
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endear
endeavour
. To conclude, it is crystal clear that the emotional, psychological and social
developement
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development
 of the
child
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 of his intellectual capabilities and brain work in the
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premises
promises
 of school as well as at home. That's why
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 educators and
parents
 are equally important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuances
  • responsibility
  • intellectual development
  • social development
  • structured learning environment
  • curriculum
  • diverse interactions
  • group activities
  • conflict resolution
  • foundational impact
  • core values
  • beliefs
  • attitudes
  • nurturing
  • joint responsibility
  • collaboration
  • continuous dialogue
  • distinct roles
  • underestimate
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