Increasing demand for technology in the 21st century plays a crucial role
to minimize
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in minimizing
the
manpower as computers are now part of each individual whether junior or senior residents; Correct article usage
apply
however
, some think of the repercussions of the usage of Linking Words
such
things as it leads to not only physical but Linking Words
also
physiological issues. Linking Words
This
essay intends to discuss both viewpoints followed by my opinion with suitable illustrations.
The most conspicuous reason Linking Words
as to
why technical gadgets are necessary to use is that Change preposition
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it
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they
provides
ease of accessibility in regards to education purposes Correct subject-verb agreement
provide
as well as
to entertain the public. Linking Words
Online
classes, Change preposition
In online
for example
, during a pandemic, the only thing Linking Words
contributed
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contributing
in
the studies of pupils is personal computers through which they Change preposition
to
are getting
their syllabus Verb problem
complete
completed
with no consequences by sitting at their places. Verb problem
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Moreover
, these gadgets can develop cognitive skills in the children as they play several kinds of games Linking Words
such
as puzzles to get desirable winning which leads to the strengthing of their minds.
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On the contrary
, others have Linking Words
their
conflicting views regarding the use of electronic products Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
that if these are used for Unnecessary verb
apply
longer
duration it can cause numerous health issues, Correct article usage
a longer
for example
, postural changes, Linking Words
according to
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the
recent research by the Indian government, Correct article usage
apply
majority
of youngsters are suffering from backache and have disc problems after sitting in front of laptops Correct article usage
the majority
while
working for a long time. Another considerable reason is that it reduces family cohesiveness. Linking Words
In other words
, people Linking Words
more
gravitate towards electronic things Correct quantifier usage
apply
that
they do not have enough time to spend with their families and everybody at Correct word choice
because
the
home carries and Correct article usage
apply
working
on their personal devices. Wrong verb form
works
Consequently
, it lacks the bond of family members with the advancement of technology.
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To conclude
, despite the fact that Linking Words
electronic
domain leads to less interaction with the community and has various negative ramifications Correct article usage
the electronic
such
as physical changes of the body, I Linking Words
Add a missing verb
am incline
incline
towards those who opine that these products are useful for not only students but Replace the word
inclined
also
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to
the senior citizens for gaining knowledge Change preposition
apply
as well as
for developing intellectual things.Linking Words
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