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Ielts Writing Task 1: Internet users as percentage of population 1999 - 2009

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Internet
 access in three various regions of the world over a ten years period from 1999 to 2009. Overall, these lines clearly show that the usage of
Internet
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 has increased
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 countries for
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 period.
Population
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 of Canada has the greatest change in
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 of users.
Furthermore
, Americans and Canadians have a very similar upward trend. Interestingly, there is
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 least change in Japan. In 1999, there was about 5
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 of
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 using
network
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 in Japan. The numbers are moderately higher in
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 two countries that year. The proportion of Japanese usage constantly went up between 1999 and 2009. More than half of humans both in the USA and Canada got
internet
 connection in 2005. By
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2009, the lowest percentage 40% of
internet
 users
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 in Japan, whereas we can see a significant rise to about 70% of web users in the USA. The dramatic leap was in Canada, almost 100% of people
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Internet accessible
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.
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