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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvatages of this trend?

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Books
 are the source of knowledge. Everyone has read a
book
 according to their interest. Now,
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book
 is converted into
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book
. Some people see
this
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 a positive trend.
Although
 others do not accept
this
 change.
First
 predominant advantage of
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book
 is that it is beneficial for our environment. In making a
paper
book
, many trees are cutting down to make
a
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paper
 but in
e-
book
, it only
need
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 a
computer
, smartphone and a good internet connection.
Secondly
,
e-
books
 are stored in
computer
 memory and
it
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 could
be easily share
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to
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 one person to another.
For example
, nowadays, many students have pdf files,
e-
books
. These notes and
books
 are shared
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 many other
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. They just have only one copy and it shared
to
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 everyone. On the flip side, a few people have
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 to collect different
books
such
 as unique or
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rare
book
,
first
 edition, and old
books
.
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 of people are
obessed
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obsessed
 with
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book
. They like to feel the
paper
 of the
book
. For them,
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the e-book
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book
 is not a good development. What they
feels
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 in
paper
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the paper
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book
 that cannot happen in
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book
.
Next
, health-related issues are occurred by
e-
books
. To elaborate
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 point, sitting in front of a
computer
 for a
longer
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 time has an ill effect on eyesight. Many children have
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 reason behind
this
 read a
book
 or watch TV on a
computer
 and smartphone for many hours. To conclude, 'a coin has two sides'
e-
books
 have many advantages like
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storage capacity,
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 to share, and many more.
However
, we can never neglect their consequences. Even though,
paper
books
 have their positive side.
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